It starts with one flake
One flake becomes two
Two flakes are suddenly a hundred, then a thousand, then ten thousand
It silently adds
First in inches, then in feet
Snow falls and we do not hear
It is soft, wet, filled with a hush
But snow knows how to add
On top of vehicles
Flakes silently coat
No one is inside to speak or turn the key
The snow coats the ground with a mute “hello”
And brings a stillness to the branches of trees
Lays quiet, peaceful
(unless you have to drive home in it)
Inside the car, the radio plays
The cell phone beeps
The driver sings
Outside, the wind blows taciturn snow
The flakes count in great numbers
Another inch
Onto the road, onto the windshield
The driver wants to put a muzzle on it
Except that it is already reticent
The snow will not talk, it will simply fall
All the way home
The traffic hums slowly and follows tiring paths of white
The driver makes it home
Parks in the garage
And steps out into silence
For additional quiet….Shhhhhhhh!
That’s a really quiet piece of writing; and I’m typing as quietly as I can …
Bravo!
I can’t hear you, what did you say? 😉
[touching keys a fraction more decisively]
I said … goodonyer …
Shhhhhh …
ok 🙂 and thankyew
Looks almost like New York Mary 😃
I’ve been noticing that in your photos, Joe. 🙂
I like to walk through trees when it’s snowing. It sort of makes noise that way. I love the poetry of all this quiet, Mary.
Thanks Andra. I love to walk in a light snow, it’s very calming.
I love this. I can hear the snow fall silently if that makes sense. I know silent doesn’t make a sounds. But the act of softly falling is captured in the lines. Enjoy your snow. I am enjoying it from your words 🙂
Thanks. I’m not sure if I’m truly enjoying it as I haven’t had the chance to go skiing, but the white has been pretty.
😉