I had poetry in my head
and then it was gone
a faded background
of orange, yellow, brown
A pointed amber of light
that would not help
Where did the words go?
Hiding in a glen of tallness
or under cover of green canopy
or hanging onto a noun with limbs
I’m tired and can’t think
My muse is here
perky and sun-gold bright
many spears standing at attention
waiting for me
to write
something
but nothing
I did have poetry in my head
perfect words and rhythm
Then
poetry stomped away
Took a hike
of colorless black and gray
down a mindless path
hidden
and didn’t come back
until today
This is a great blending of words and pictures, Mary. Well done! I know the feeling of having thoughts come and then flee. You captured it well.
Thanks Dan! I was playing with my new phone’s camera last weekend and wanted to use the few good shots that came from experimentation. So I sat at my computer, blank stare…then left…then came back…then left…then came back…and finally the words wrote themselves. I like it when that happens. 🙂
The pictures are great! The worst is when you don’t remember the words, but you do remember that they were perfect!
and i’m so glad it came back in such a lovely way –
Thanks Beth! 🙂
ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! Well done Mary. It’s an inspiring piece. You clever thing.
Love and squidges ~ Cobs. x
Thanks Cobs! Door County, where the photos were taken, and my sometimes blank mind were all the inspiration I needed.
oooh. my Favorite so far!!!
Well, thank you! I’m honored!
“hanging onto a noun with limbs” Ooh, girl, that was a fabulous line! You best copyright that!
I’ll get right on that. I was trying to come up with a different word for tree and noun popped into my head. Thanks for labeling it fabulous. 😊
Beautiful. The images are lovely too!
Coming from a poetess and photographer, your kind comments are always humbly accepted, Cheryl.
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Like Joey, I LOVED the line ‘hanging onto a noun with limbs’. I also love the final stanza when ‘poetry stomped away’.
Thanks Joanne! Poetry, for me, seems to be a matter of either it’s there or it’s not. No in between.
Yeah – I have that problem in general.
You have described the unpredictable nature of creativity in a way we can relate to. Frustrating, yet the pictures are very beautiful, even the black and gray one. I enjoyed the personification of poetry stomping away like a child and taking a hike.
Thanks, Joanna. Writer’s block IS frustrating, but I was glad this time to have some encouragement from the photos.
Wonderful! One of your very very best! ❤
Thank you, Marian! Your kind words mean so very much to me.